Very interesting story! SusanCaspian stories annoy me because they're so different from the book, but so far I love the "geek." I can't wait to read more!

O, I do so love this story - don't stop now! You're such a good writer, one of the best on in my reckoning.

Susan's character has always fascinated me. I like to think she was redeemed in the end. :)

Please continue this story - it's marvelous both in plot and writing! :D

UPDATE! Except I will be sad again when they all die. I guess that is where Warren will come back into the picture, right? Or is this just my evil idea.

Definitely Susan and the Geek. Loved it. 94 out of 100

I stopped reading because I thought you were going to rewrite the entire adeventure. Very good. Loved the emotion.

Plot-hole: It had to be at least 1943 according to the books.
Other than that, thumbs up!

Very cute. Why did they name her Lucy? After her know dead (I guess) sister? I was confused by that. Anyway, very nice. Not exactly Lewis, but close. 93 out of 100. Very good.

Please continue PLEASE! I love this story!

I love this story so far (and how anti-Suspian you are). Warren seemed really cool to me when I watched the movie, but then again, I like nerds. :P I liked how you made it so that his determination to talk to her wasn't just sheer awkwardness, but more of a mission. Can't wait to read more!

Dearheart you so rock and your stories rock 100% as well. Keep up the fantastic work!

This is really amazing...I'm a big supporter of your movement. Keep up the good work!

My last review was on ch.5. This one is on ch.1 about how long they are married. In the story, it says "Fine then, Phyllis. A happy 7th anniversary to you, too.." That part sounds fine but the part where Susan thinks "She could never have guessed that seven years ago, today, she would be married to that nerdy kid she met at the train station..." How does that work? I mean, It SOUNDS like the story is refuring to the first time they meet at the train station. So with that background, lets say Susan is 14. Seven years later they are married and have a five year old and a two year old. subtract five years and you get that she had Lucy at 16. THEY MUST HAVE BEEN MARRIED, RIGHT? Subtract one year. THEN when you come the conclusion that Susan GOT MARRIED AT 15. That doesn't sound correct. I mean SURE there is the possibility that they are talking about a different date that comes later in the story that we haven't heard about. But with the information we are given it just doesn't fit. BUT I could be reading it TOTALY wrong!
Thanks for looking at this! I am giving this review from one author to another.
PLEASE no hard feelings! (And please forgive my bad spelling.)

Hi! I have some advice. How does John know what school "Phillis" goes to?

Great! Update soon!

This is a wonderfully well done fanfic--I look forward to the chapters to come! Thank you--