This was amazing!
How could someone write this off as bad? I don't understand. If they were looking for canon and IC fics, WHY were they reading yaoi? You write this in such a way, it's almost as if it WERE canon.
Thanks for sharing this story!

so bloody hot...X3

I am happy you wrote it with much zeal and such hopefully I could read more of your stories...XD

WWWOOOOOWWWWW! I don't know if you are still checking reviews on this story but it is still my favorite fanfic of all time. I have read a ton of them and I'm even writing one of my own now. Yours, this one is still my most favorite. I'm telling you, what I wouldn't give to be Inuyasha. I love the description and how well you describe what Inu. is thinking. It's so perfect the naughty little puppy looking to be spanked. PERFECT Anyone who thinks other wise can go F themselves, this is the best story ever. I love all the stories of yours that I have read and I am slowly going to reread them all so I can review on them all. When I first started reading fanfics I was a nube and didn't review, I'm sorry, now that I'm an author too, I know what it means to hear from the fans. So I just wanted to shout loud and clear I LOVE YOUR STORIES
I would feel honored if you were interested in taking a peak at mine. It is called Evil Rising, Litch Queen of the Western Continent. I have it posted on adult fan fiction . net because the later chapters are way to graphic to post here. I am really struggling to add a little more love to their relationship and you are really amazing at writing and making the reader feel the love. So I would really really love some advice if you have time. I know life keeps us all busy. I'm a married fangirl too, I've got 2 little boys and they make it hard to get anything done, so I completely understand if your not interested.

Anyway, your A/N about your husband reading your fic cracked me up! My hubby thinks I'm just slightly off my rocker for what I read and write so I know exactly what your talking about. Thank you again for writing and sharing. It's back to reading for me)

I've read this story before. I wonder why I didn't review? Any way, I LOVED IT! I don't care how OOC it was it was great writing and definantly SHOULD NOT be in the worst fanfics section! That Kacie person seems like a real friggin' jerk. You know what should be in the worst fanfics section? All those stories that have 10 grammar and spelling mistakes in every sentence, not fanfics that are interesting and well written.

This story is AMAZING! I love it, little OOC but just like you said, Inuyasha is only this around Sesshoumaru and that's the way it should be! Awesome awesome. :3

Pretty hot, yeah it was a little OOC but well it needed to be, makes it smuttier B-)

I loved it!

Adding Japanese to an English language fanfic, for a Japanese fandom is standard practice. Some things don't translate well, and even the scantilations have some Japanese left in them. Youkai for instance, doesn't translate well. Retarded idiots see the English word demon and they think it means demon like a Christian demon, which is an evil being. Youkai aren't Christian demons, they are nature spirits and the order of amanojyaksha aren't evil they are neutral. InuYasha and Sesshoumaru are neutral spirits not evil ones so that means that youkai is the best word for it.

Bitching about Japanese in a fic makes you look like an ignorant fucktard who is too lazy to actually learn about the fandom's native culture and language.

This is yaoi, which a lot of yaoi isn't about being as in character as possible, its about being as sexy as possible. Also most of Izzanami's stories take place years after the canon which means the characters would have grown, matured, and developed. Even in the one year of the canon timeline Sesshoumaru's character changed entirely from being a cold heartless asshole who hated all humans to suddenly caring for a human child as if she were his own daughter.

If he can change that much in only one year imagine how much he can change in several years.

BAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Dear Different Fucktard from below,

Well hello there samefag.

English Motherfucker! Do you speak it? For a link to be there someone idiot would have to be checking my reviews in my stories to see what's in them to write something to put a link in, in the first place (why the fuck would there have been a link to the reviews for this fic before this new caper you've all been on?) God, you people are such morons.
Hurr fucking durr Like you dumb cunts havn't said that one over 9000 times before. Did you think that one up all by yourself. Ok, I'll clap along with you for yourself, good job!
4srs, come up with something new.
I write my ten minute "teal" because baiting you whores in here after you start shit so you can make asses of yourselves (once more) and showcase your creepiness amuses me greatly.

What sad lives you people must have, it's almost inconceivable some people could be so just completely pathetic.

Also, GDIAF

Or maybe they just followed the link there? Yeah.

If you don't care why are you still here writing teal?

Dear, Different anon,

You've made wank report again.
And your point is what? Someone posted me in a wank report? The hells you say!

So either
or some people look at all the stories I have up and their reviews on a daily basis (when I haven’t updated shit in six months) to see what could possibly be in them (oh wait! I know they must do that, I can see them in my livejournal that I hardly use on a daily basis)… That’s really sad.

Or

I had suspicions of, the person who wrote five reviews was a troll and either wrote whatever is written, or told someone else who would about it… still equally sad.
And either way…

c. You proved my point.

Srsly, it’s pathetic in itself to have your life wrapped up in any one thing so much, and that thing being fanfiction is rather sad.

It’s beyond pathetic to not only have your life revolve around fanfiction but revolve around the people who write it (people you don’t even like Am I back in highschool, the behavior implies I am). Especially those people that hardly write it anymore, nor are involved in the disgustingly tear worthy culture that revolves around livejournal/journal fen where fandom.

Take a bow for revealing how utterly pathetic and ludicrous your lives are.

InB4 I’m paranoid.

InB4 I’m defensive.

Good night ladies.
And Kacie... I can't even be bothered to read your BS. I have better things to do.

You've made wank report again.

Izzanami, have you considered the fact that maybe some people who aren't writers browse and review this website without having accounts? Why are you so defensive? I wasn't upset at first, but "raeg some moar"? Where do I sound angry in that review? I was just confused. I'm getting a bit irritated now. I know plenty of people who review that way. There was absolutely nothing trolly or harsh about my review, exactly what was so mean about it? I only politely pointed out that your dialogue and narrative could've been more subtle. I didn't post concrit in a polite way? Really? Pointing out what you could've done better is "being an ass"? Why are you so paranoid? I never said your writing sucks or called you a bitch or troll. I simply thought this fic could've been done better. That somehow makes me "trolly"?

The main point of my review was that Inuyasha was OOC was because he was a sub? Did you not read the part where I said he can be sub without being so far apart from his original character? Did you not read the numerous other points I made? I came back to this fic because I'd only read the first chapter and was about to read the second one, and I left three reviews because after I left my original review I forgot that I had more to say.

About the archive-um, that's the whole point of archives like that. I don't agree with them, but it's kind of like those mary-sue sporking things and weepingcock.

I just don't think that you're too good at taking crit. You left those reviews up because you can't delete non-anon reviews. This is my last message to you, I was gonna read some more of your stuff, but your immature behavior has turned me off. Goodbye.

Kacie,

Btw, and I forgot this. I use Japanese where I want and where I like the sound of it. I speak Japanese, so no, it's not fangirl Japanese (and I don't care if you think it is), and generally I use it mostly in dialogue nowadays, and where an English word doesn't capture the same meaning.

Also, in the entire time I've written under this penname, I think I've deleted two or three reviews... look at my reviews if you think I delete everything that's not positive... there are plenty of negative reviews and reviews that aren't super fangirl positive. The ones deleted before yours were from OBVIOUS trolls, and based on your weird behavior, I'm assuming you're one as well.

I've hardly been in my fanfiction accounts for months. What are you claiming, to remember every review I get?