|Reviews for The First Day|
| Fluff-is-awesome 4/25/13 . chapter 18
Good for Ron. He's so good, putting everyone else ahead of him... He deserves a break that kid.
Oh and I'm also really glad you skipped over all of the 'Ron should be an auror too' stuff cuz he really is better staying out of it... Good job keeping everyone in character!
| Fluff-is-awesome 4/24/13 . chapter 17
Alright so I'm only on chapter 17, but I just wanted to let you know I'm really enjoying it so far... I can tell you really took your time easing into normal life. Good job hitting all stages of healing I like it.
I had to stop and review this chapter because I was just so excited that you stole from the epilogue that was so great! Genius I love it! Talk about dejavu! :)
But overall really really good so far... Good job with George, good job with Harry... Not much on Ron and Hermione though... Maybe you'll talk about them a little more later? Also I don't know if your putting George with Katie or not, but I'm a George/Ange fan so I'm hoping maybe you'll put him with Ange...
Anyway I'm enjoying it a lot great job! :)
| Booklove992001 4/24/13 . chapter 1
| Guest 4/16/13 . chapter 55
There are not many stories that hook me the way yours did. It was an extremely well written piece that brought about all the right emotions at the exact same time. This website is known for the short unfinished pieces of the really good stories, and I am really glad I found this one.
| imo.b 4/18/13 . chapter 55
this is a good story, i really enjoyed reading it :) sometimes you imitated j.k. rowling's style of writing so accurately, i thought it was her! my only negative comment is that, harry and ginny seemed a lot less in love than proved in the 6th and 7th book. i don't think either of them would have ever been hesitant about their relationship. you forgot to add the magic harry felt on his lips every time he kissed ginny. nevertheless, it really is a great story! thanks for letting me read it.
| jxdsxcwcwb 4/13/13 . chapter 37
While your story is brilliant and I'm loving it so far, you did go a bit too far with the Northern Ireland situation. It's a controversial topic and you're not really showing how it really was, what I mean is you can't compare it to the situation in Harry Potter. Other than that I really love this and you've been so amazing so far! I can't manage to drag myself away from this story because I'm enjoying it so much. Good job but try not to be so biased.
| Sarah 4/6/13 . chapter 55
| Guest 4/6/13 . chapter 5
Is your point to make me cry, it's workin
| daleyllewey 4/2/13 . chapter 2
Wow I'm only 2 chapters in & am already crying.
I swear this story gets better each time I read it. I think this is my third or fourth time through. I love Charlie's silent support. Reminiscent of Ginny in chapter 1. Not a trait shared with Molly obviously.
Love it :)
| daleyllewey 4/2/13 . chapter 1
I've decided to start from the beginning all over again :) I'm so excited.
The emotions your writing evokes gets me every time. I simply adore everything you've done. Re-reading this is like coming home.
| twilightfreak4evr 4/1/13 . chapter 18
I have issues with the American magical government being called a Ministry, and the leader being called a Minister of Magic. Shouldn't it be a Bureau or Agency, and a President? Those just seem like they would be more in keeping with American terminology. So it makes sense when the British kiddos say the American Minister of Magic, but shouldn't Professor Carter correct them? Or did you do that on purpose?
| PrincessLazyPants 3/30/13 . chapter 55
This story...has brought out tears and smiles and laughter...and a lot of anxiety. You've managed to toy with my emotions so many times in a mere 55 chapters, and I can't thank you enough for writing this marvellous story. The fact that you've focused on basically every character in the series, without stretching their role too much, or swaying away from canon demonstrates how much work you've put into this. Your writing is spectacular and I couldn't find a hair out of place with it. I've spent the past two days reading this and while my school marks are going to suffer for that, I don't regret a bit of it.
| ThrashtillDeath 3/28/13 . chapter 55
My good God, what a story. A journey, even. A truly, truly fantastic piece of work.
| rebein96 3/27/13 . chapter 55
Great story, I loved it!
| ThrashtillDeath 3/27/13 . chapter 4
This is killing me. It's actually crushing, especially George. And Snape's too. No one but Harry at Snape's funeral just got to me.
This is an excellent story so far.