I was left with an amazing feeling of awe after reading this work of art.
The subject matter was portrayed as tenderly as it should be, while perfectly displaying the innocence of Lazlo and the grumpiness of Edward. The character's reactions were genuine, and the emotions were utterly believable.
It's stories like these that make me yearn for the sweet romance shown, and encourage me to create works of equal beauty.
I can promise that trying to match that beauty will definitely be a challenge worth taking.
Thank you so much.-LoD

I know this story is a bit aged but my goodness is it well written! I could totally understand Lazlo's perspective and emotions on the subject. Light, romantic, sweet, and truly well done.

VERY cute story here. D Nice and easy, not too rushed, and keeping up with the characterization of the... well, characters. XD Great work

Gahh, I love your fics ! They're so cute and amazing !

I love how you described Lazlo's naivety (excuse the spellings) and how Edward sort of helped him out. Paha. 3

This was beautiful :3

I think that is a cute fic!

God job D

Cute story, it was really good. I love your stories!

Aww, poor Lazlo. At least Raj wasn't adding ChatSpeak (tm) into the conversation, or Lazlo would've been even MORE lost.

Overall, very nicely done, as always! The delicate subject matter was treated with your usual sensitivity and charm, keeping both Lazlo and Edward perfectly in-character even factoring in the teenage angst you had them going through. Great work!

O: That was great! Hee and just too cute! _ It just seemed to fit really well good job!

that was so cute! It was so perfectly balanced and written!

D'aw.

Beautifully in character and an awesome story! Good job. :3

Im surprised no one's reviewed this, I guess I'll be the first.

It was really good, everyone was in character, yet you still made it an Edward x Lazlo fic. 10/10!