Hot damn, I like it. xD

Well, this was definitely an interesting read, very unique- something extremely hard to find on this site. You did a great job with building the suspense in the beginning and piquing the reader’s interest. I love creepy stories! There were a few spelling/grammar errors, enough to where it detracted a bit from the story. Also, tense changes were a pretty big issue. But, all in all, I thought this was a very enjoyable read, you could definitely expand on this if you wanted to and if you cleaned it up a little, this would stand great on its own too. Again, great idea, we need more interesting stories on this site! Hope to read more from you.

-Cedar

Woah. Freaky with a capital F.

I loved it! Oh my god it was so good, so original! I love Leon/Squall and Tifa. This was so good that it is a shame that it is only a oneshot. I would love if you continued this or if you'd do another one similar to this. Again' thank you so much for this!

that was so ** awesome, i mean omg, i loved it, the way it's written so carnal, i love it oh my god.
twins, i have no other words that could possibly describe how awesome this fic is. >.

amazing, i loved the ending!