|Reviews for Wings of Freedom|
| The friend of water 61 9/7/08 . chapter 1
This was amazing I absolutley loved it. I can't wait until theres more. However long it takes for this or Sightseeing to continue I'm more than happy to wait until the end of time. I'll always look forward to seeing more of your beautiful work miss Barako...
| Mrs. Abject 7/15/08 . chapter 1
I'm really liking that story so much. Original characters take a while to grow on me, but Daya seems like a pretty good character so far, not Mary Sue ish or "why are they there" or whatever. Luctes is well-written, too. I'm getting the sense of someone incredibly proud, incredibly bitter, but also who definitely seems to care and maybe even a little remorseful. I'm curious about what happened to Cara and Grantes, besides just the general idea of what happened, and how Luctes and Daya have reacted to it. But it's very promising and good so far and I eagerly await the next chapter and finding out where this is going- is it about the Soren getting their wings back? about Luctes reconciling with Cara and Grantes through their daughter? the Soren really adjusting to a life on the ground instead of still being bitter? something I've missed entirely? Curious.
| Sunflare Glaze 7/11/08 . chapter 1
Very nicely done. I've been waiting for this story for some time and so far, I'm not disappointed in the slightest. You've captured the audience well in the first chapter and you already can feel for Daya. Can't wait to see what will happen next.
| TamaKit123 7/3/08 . chapter 1
This is so cute! I hope you write more about this!