geeze i cussed a lot in this chapter! seriously! i don't swear! but yeah, i love this! this is my favourite series by you guys! XD love it! more when you can? iPOR FAVOR!

I wonder if Danny and Riz are going to do it. Don't know why I said that, it just popped into my head. Update.

LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL. The last part made me laugh so hard. Update soon.

great as usual. Feel free to add to my characters personality if you want. She's just chill you know so IDk where to go from there. Just don't make her a bitch and have everyone hate her. Are riley and Rhuben virgins Riz could take that step with danny and the story could go places off that. IDk but great job as always you're really talented.

hei woho, so yeaa i like it so much it was so cool, all the fight between dougs and danny! jajajaaj i imagine it like a movie! i like it so much! would he tell her that he loves her? oh cliffy! jajajajaj well i have this suggestion that maybe when they are finally together like one of monsters they had for ex girfriends kisses him and one of the girls like saw them and they all like break up and that it was the intention of the ex GF because they wanted to get them back! and from there they dont talk, well the guys will try to talk to the girls, obviously! and that it is the tipical scene when you think that your BF is cheating on you! well just a suggeastion! so yeah i like it so much and you are a great writer! please keep updating and update as soon as you can! bye bye!

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A/N: I know this is short too. But it’s get longer after this. Wow and it’s still the first day of camp, that’s going to change soon too.

that made me laugh! hahhahahaha! but poor danny and dougie! falling into the water! :( poor babies. i hope they're okay! and don't catch pnemonia!

That was really funny. It made me laugh out loud so hard. Update soon, I want to know what happens between Danny and Riz.

“Fuck…” Danny muttered irritably as he and Dougie tried to paddle their way to though the long water plants that grew close to the land. They had been stuck for the last fifteen minutes, and as long as they both paddled the other way, they would be staying like that.

“Danny! Stop being a jackass, and paddle my way!” Dougie yelled frustrated as he glared behind him, were Danny sat. Danny just glared back just as fiercely.

“Fuck no; you will only manage to get us more stuck in this stupid shit!” He made a vague gesture to the plants, which were currently wrapped around his paddle.

The younger boy frowned, a pout clearly on his face. “…You suck, you know that?”

That part made me laugh so hard. I can actually picture that happening between the two boys. I wonder what Danny has to asy to Riz, I hope they're not breaking up. Update soon, I want to know what happens next.

Yeah a chap about yours truley! i LOVE YOU GUYS AND YOUR STILL MY FAV WRITERS even if you dont update as ASAP as you used too. jkluv ya

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tommy! he's such a cutie! one kick to the shin, being called fat and gay and he's all ready to go fight some 7 year old. sheesh! where's gen when you need her? i love little kiddies! they're so cute and fun! teaching them lessons like "say please and thank you" makes me feel like a mom! hahahah! i did that yesterday with my cousin. i felt old. hahah! XD

There's so much you can do with this story and I hope you do it all soon because it would be very funny to read. Update soon.

“Tom, Tom, stop, you can’t hit little kids” Kale said as he grabbed Tom’s arm and pulled him backwards.

“Why not?” Tom asked, ticked off.

“You’ll go to jail, it’s against the law.” Sydney spoke up grinning like a jack-o-lantern.

I never believed that, it's like 'you can't hit a girl because it's against the law'. I say, every now and then a bad kid needs a good thwaking. Lol, update soon, this was great.

hahahahaha i love it so much! ilaugh so loud with this chapter that my brother came a nd yelled at me! but it was cool! jajajaja you should never be a father and are you gay! jajajaja lmao! well i like it and you are a great writer so please keep updating as soon as you can! bye bye!

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Oh my god. I have NEVER laughed so hard in my entire life. Jacqui's line cracked me up. It was so good! Update soon.

Ooh, ex-girlfriends, that's definitely not going to be good.