It was a good story generally, but that last part where it says, "Sirius had felt a pang at his heart but remained silent.
He hated having regrets." really got to me. It just kind of summed up the tragic aspects of Sirius that sometimes get overlooked. It was just a really emotional perspective, but pleasantly understated. Really nice!

Keep up the good work!
~Amulet

I liked the 'I'm scared' bit more.:D It was very good.

I liked the whole thing. No certain parts, don't make me!. It's not a whole story without the rest you know, so it's great!

Aww i loved it! you dont realyy get to see that perspective very often. yay it ended on an intersting note

Aw, look what you've done, you made me cry.
I would have to say that my favorite parts would be at the very end
'He hated having regrets'
and when he wanted to tell Harry to be like James.
Thank you

This is a brilliant story; I enjoyed reading every word of it. My favorite parts would probably be "I love you," because it struck a chord in my heart. It's beautifully written, all of it.

:D

The last line of each of them is perfect. Really.

It's spectacularly amazingly brilliant, and I LOVE IT!

This is such a wonderous story and it really touched my heart.

wow!

personally, i liked all of them. i think they were all amazing. the 'im sorry' and 'i love you' ones really got to me, though. amazing story. :) i love it.

Good story. I enjoyed the reflections used at the end of each short story.

This was just beautiful. Wonderful work!

I really liked this.
It's a whole knew side of Sirius we never saw. Favorite parts were the dont be like me and i'm jealous of you.
"He opened yet another bottle of Firewhiskey instead"

I loved all the lines, But I have to say the 'Don't be like me' ove got to me, because it seemed like something that would have actually happened.


~Meeh-san