Thanks, this read like a Doctor Who novel and i loved it. I really hope you write a follow up from this, I'd love to see them backtracking where Alice has been to find Romana. Though I'm thinking you will probably leave it here...
Anyway good job and thanks

A thoroughly enjoyable story--with a twist at the end I sure didn't expect! 10 out of 10 stars.

I only saw one episode with Romana, and I'm pretty sure it was the one where she was first introduced. Tom Baker, Key of Time (or whatever it was called - that thing where they had to find all of the pieces which they had to detect with this rodlike clear thing with a red thing at the end) part one, as in the first episode of it, and the piece was this chunk of purple rock that everyone wanted because they all thought it was really expensive.
As it turns out, that's also the only Tom Baker episode I've ever seen.

This chapter was excellent! Perfect way to resolve the crime - "A pox on female hormones!" - and a perfect way to convince Rose of the truth. Of course she wouldn't come around to it at first, she's only a human after all.
Again, I have to compliment you on your characters. Everything written is perfect, exactly in accordance with what they would say in that situation. Doctor Who should take this story and use it as a script.

OMD I love this story SO much!

The characters are perfect, the language is perfect, the grammar is perfect, and best of all, it's hilarious!!

I laughed several times, nearly three times a chapter, reading this story - forget whatever I said to anyone else about their Tennant portrayal, yours is perfect! Several several quotes are ones I'd want to keep, as well.

But look! The story isn't complete! There's more to come! Yay to the world!
I'm waiting for more, you know I am, and you'd better not dissapoint me. Your writing is absolutely fantastic - brilliant - multebeney - and I'm ready to go into your profile and see what else you've written so I can get more.

Perfect. Absolutely. You get a 15 out of 10.

-Kaylee

You updated! -squees-

I'm so glad Rose and the Doctor are together again. Though I must say, poor Rose, making out with the wrong person. I loved her reaction to the Doctor declaring who he (she?) is. But where's the fake-Doctor getting off to?

Can't wait for the next chappie!

Eagerly looking forward to the continuation.

*claps* Another very good chapter. A good lot of rambling that was good in this chapter, but unfortunately this sentence doesn't make any sense. Or does it? Either way, another great chapter, and the story's still amazing.

I don't know why I haven't read this sooner. I LOVE Dr. Who and, as always, your characterizations are perfect. =)



“Children who are afraid of clowns,” said the Doctor dogmatically, “almost invariably develop a distinct lisp.”

Like Christian Bale's lisp? =D


This is brilliant. I'm definitely favoriting this one.

I love this story! Especially the end of this chapter ("Rose had no room for complaint, the little hypocrite.") I can't wait to see what happens next!

Things will certainly be awkward for the Doctor when he gets back into his own body.

i can't wait to see what happens next ... evil woman :-P

The Doctor's in for it this time, isn't she?

Ooh, I liked this chapter. Very interesting idea for a story. I want to see how the Doctor fixes this one. ;) I like it so far, though.

oh pls update soon!