Long but I like it ^^ Who did you imagine the other phantom person was?
Great job and keep it up ^^

I really loved this story... I read it a few months ago when it first came, but only now as I found it again, I decided to review.

I love how you've written this. The melancholy of their hearts and feelings can be felt and (I feel stupid to say this, but it's true) I feel like someone's clutching my chest. Believe it or not, I feel almost ready to cry. It's strange, since I rarely cry when reading or watching something.

I love how you portrayed Kanda (since "the mystery person" cannot be anyone else) and how he and Allen need each other. It brings a bitter feeling to the story and the fact, how Allen continues to call them phantoms, gives a sense of unreality that never disappears.

Still, I'm saddened by the fact how Lavi just... Disappeared. I mean, even as a Bookman, he was the self-proclaimed best friend of Kanda's and to never even say good bye... It just struck me badly. And how Jerry and most of the others just left without ever telling. It was plain sad. And even if they told, the leaving... Yeah...

So, uh... Thank you for writing this. It was a joy to read.

Chiyon Shi.

Very well-written >wO
It had a strange, heavy, melancholic air to it -- like I could imagine them being all alone there. ;A;

What a sad story. Everyone left and Allen and Kanda (it is isn't it) are the only two left of the 'teens'. If Lavi was around, Allen probably wouldn't be feeling so depressed.

On a separate note, what happened to Timcampy? Did he leave with Cross? I thought that Tim would rather stay with Allen...

So sad.
But I think he is Kanda.

i think it is kanda but who is it?

still loving this story~ XD

The other phantom besides Allen sounds a whole lot like Kanda. Im going to guess it was based on Kanda. That was pretty interesting. Thanks.

~ShinigamixGirl

i like it! its allen and kanda no one else but them lol

Although the person is really pretty evident, not naming him adds a special charm to the story. *can`t stop thinking, if she guessed the wrong person*
And althoug the beginning is so sad, the ending has a light feeling to it... *sigh* I definitely like it)

GWAH~

I love this story so hard.

that wass swet

good one! it reeks of emptyness and fits so well. :)

In a way it's sweet...but in another way sad...but I liked it!