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SitarSomebody
2009-10-26 . chapter 1
Oh. My. Gawd.

That... that was brilliant ;w; Wonderful writing style, wonderful plot, WONDERFULLY SAPPY AND I WAS CRYING BY THE END.

So pretty. And the mental conversations were cool :3 This story was rather amazing and I love it.
twiinklestar
2008-10-28 . chapter 11
OH MY GOSH! So it was just a dream? You SO HAD ME THERE! ZOMG! >.< Well, I'm sad that it's over but it was really good. Great job!
hi
2008-10-26 . chapter 11
way to go Kuro-tan!~
twiinklestar
2008-10-19 . chapter 10
Umm... what? I don't really get it.. but hey, ITS YUE! Hello old friend! ( : I wonder what's going to happen now... but really.. what happened? Update soon!
twiinklestar
2008-10-09 . chapter 9
Oh no! What's going to happen now? Will dear Kuro-tan ever see Fai again? AH! I love this story but I have one request, could you try and make the chapters a bit longer?
hi
2008-10-03 . chapter 8
he didnt even get to decide T.T cant wait till the next part. But personally i think theyd have waited for him to say goodbye.
twiinklestar
2008-10-02 . chapter 8
Oh no! Moko-chan, NO! Stop it now before Fai leaves! -cries- Kurogane... I feel so bad. That would suck brutally... Aww. Why didn't Tomoyo-hime wake him up.. Maybe she didn't want him to see them leave. I'll be waiting for the next chapter ) :
twiinklestar
2008-08-25 . chapter 7
This story is very unique. I like all the unspokeness to it. It's very original. Indeed, Tomoyo-hime does have a very flowy, goddess sense in her. I wonder, will Kurogane stay or will he go. Please, do update soon!
Fai'swingedchronicles
2008-08-22 . chapter 7
Update!
fireflyfantasy
2008-08-02 . chapter 5
I am enjoying your story. Sad but good. I love Kuro/fai! Keep it up :)
Tameny
2008-07-09 . chapter 4
This is very good! Keep writing!
Kalily
2008-07-08 . chapter 3
Until Tomoyo noticed Fai is devastated >.< (poor...)
Will you continue writting, isn't? I want to read the end :3
Bye
Kalily
2008-07-06 . chapter 2
You actualiced such quickly!^^
Is so sad, I hope they make up so...upload the next chapter soon! When I come back to my holydays I will read it ^^

PS: You're welcome ^^
Kalily
2008-07-05 . chapter 1
Hello! I liked you fict, short but good and interesting, I will be waiting for the next chapter, but...are you noticed you are upload it in Spanish's category? ^^U

Bye
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