*opens and closes hands* Wow.



That was impactful. There was a sold idea there. Stupendously solid and vibrant. There is some 'normal' characterizations that were ignored, however I think it fits. Somehow. Always room for refining. But only if you are in the technical mood.

Yeah, that was pretty good. Nice stream of consciousness. I just wish it was a little clearer when this was taking place. I know it's probably not anywhere specifically, but still. I got a couple of scenes like this, but I don't quite go in this direction. Anyway, thanks for sharing!

(By the way, you might have already gotten this review from me. evidently crashed. I'm not sure if this sent or not.)