I AGREE WITH YOU COMPLETELY.
MAYBE THAT IS WHY SHE IS SO BITTER.
AND YES,I STILL DO NOT LIKE HER MUCH, BUT I DO UNDERSTAND HER SITUATION.

It's great!!
I like it!!
Its so sad!!
Poor Lauren :(

I would be bitter too if I went through this. I think that everyone writes Lauren off as a slut or a bitch without bothering to even guess why she acts the way she does. This gives people a glimpse into her life and maybe why she's so jealous of Bella.

I love this. I'm a sucker for stories which delve deeper into a character than the outside view and this is very plausible as everyone acts differently when they're at home. I liked the explanation and it was written very well.
Good job.
Geth342

It's kinda a sad story. Sometimes, a bad history makes a person sour, and I sometimes thought that Lauren wasn't always evil too. This is a good story, bittersweet.

I Feel Sorta Bad For Lauren now. . .
It Was Interesting reading From Lauren's Point Of View. . .

Aw. This made me sad. I've always liked Lauren better than I liked Jessica. At least Lauren isn't fake. And I've always wondered why she seemed so mean. Everyone has a story. This puts Lauren in a better light. I liked it even though it was sad.

I absolutely loved that, I hate it when people always portray Lauren as a "slut" or just mean :/.

It's nice she has a background... more depth for her character, she's more real than any of the Twilight characters MEYER wrote. None of the characters she's written have the same... charm, as you've given Lauren.

Thank you for writing this... this is going into my favourites.

Great, totally great story. I think that every time I read any of my twilight books and come across Lauren, I'll think of this. You made it seem so real, and I must say - well done.

this is actually really good! i din't know what to expect, but i really like it. i think if ya wanted to, you could make this a story. but i do like it as a one shot. very good. =] ♥

OME! taht was REALLY good. Instead of making the characters act completely,well...OOC, or writing a smutty version of BD, you actually thought of a character who should hava a backstory.
That's what a real writer would do!!(actually, I recken SM will explaing luaren in bd or in an interview...otherwise it would show SM as a bad writer.Which she isn't.*whimpers* please don't withold my copy if BD Stephenie,please!

i really love it when people write different things other than just ExB. it's interesting to think that lauren is actually a real person too and not just a plot device.

Brill story :)

Ahw! Poor Lauen... Well... Kind of.
GOod story though!