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| Naiya-Hime 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is funny (strangely) despite all the horrid things that have gone on it the first, what, 10 words? It's really great! Keep it up! -Naiya |
| blondexx16 2008-08-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat beginning, Very original =] I think you should make this fic into a SasuSaku one =) And maybe you could tell it from different points of view..? I'm not a very big fan NaruIno, ohkay.. so I don't really like them at all but if you put it as a side pairing I wouldn't really mind =] Sorry, i'm not trying to tell you what to do.. it's just that I like SasukexSakura better XD So, yeah. Update soon =D xoxo Blondiie |
| Spazztasticle 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseDx Oh my gosh. Ino is hereby FLAGGED from EVER drinking again... ._. I feel sad for sakura.. yet, envy her. Hello, itachi is hot. But she loves sasuke. Sasuke should forgive her >o< If he really loves her. Though.. thats kinda gross to think about o_0 I mean... nevermind >/> I'm so NOT going into that. |
| Era-Head 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI've gotta say, this looks completely interesting, and I bet I'll follow this story to it's completion. Good job! Your writing is always great. |
| waveblader213 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abusethis is fun. i hope you update it soon. |
| Conspicuous Pink 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abusevery nicely done, I wouldn't go for the NaruIno though if I were you. Possibly SasuSaku viewed from Ino's POV and eventual ShikaIno? Those are the best pairings I suppose, I think that Sasuke should get over it though, I hate to see him be an ass (fanfiction or not.) But anyways, on with the review I absolutely loved this and all it's complex creative genius, I didn't exactly get the concpet of the 'Open mouth. Insert foot' thing, but I did get the actual sentiment. |
| Animecherryblossem33 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseI can NOT believe (drunk) Ino did that! I mean come on! even if she was drunk. OMG! well anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I NEED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENES NEXT! |
| allurement 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseOhmygod, I ADORE that book that nothing else and have been waitingwaitingwaiting for some author to use that plot in a Naruto AU. The fact that you're the one that did it makes it even better, because no one else can write Ino like you do. Oh, Sasuke. |
| dark Alley 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story. Can't wait for your next chapter! |
| ArilianaFireQueen 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWell I have to say that you are doing a great job so far! ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next. So far, it sounds just like what I imagine Ino would say/do. Keep up the great writing! ~Ari/Rebi |
| quivering quill 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abusemore! |
| Lolita Loveless 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseOMGWTFBBQ! Here I was, expecting a cute, fluffy story - and I get THIS. It's better than I could have ever possibly hoped for! The drama of it all...man, reading what Ino said was the biggest shock I've every gotten, and I swear my face right then would've cracked anyone up. It wasn't even like ' :O ', it was a full out ' 0_0 ' . You are my favourite author, and I can never get enough of your crazy, totally unique plots and your wonderful writing style. I mean, I can barely stand ShikaIno, but I LOVE it when you write it! Therefore, I shall read this story and enjoy it muchly :D Eagerly awaiting your next update, Jez ♥ |
| BuBBly CaNis luPus 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. Talk about babbler mouths, right? Forgot it was even a Shika/Ino story till you mentioned it at the end. I'm sure that everything will work out between...well, everyone. Continue, please? |
| Itachi-kunsOneTrueLove 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWOW! i love this story! Ino seems pretty funny in this story..oh jeez she reminds me of my friend...haha. i hope that Sasuke and Sakura do end up getting married though followed by Ino and Shika. |
| Humming LadyBug 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abusehahaha, that was nice! a tragic quirky opening is what i wud call it xp |