I do think you have potential to make a really great longer fic out of this; I love how you stuck to the detestable facts of canon 'reality' and made it into something very realistic. How about something comes up that Hermione needs to work with Harry on...Harry and only Harry? You could do great things with this. I'll be hoping against hope for an update.

That was beautiful, and so heartbreaking.

Tragic, Simply Tragic

But amazingly good.

lol this is funny

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I guess it just proves that life isn't so simple. Really a tragic story. I wonder what Ginny and Ron are thinking.

Great job, beautiful insight.

wow...really good! I normally don't like angsty, but this changed my mind! well done!

Really really good.
Both the writing and the general plot/mood are simply awsome.