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| Jane Doe 616 2008-07-26 ch 1,  | abusevery good introspective with holly. i really liked it. it was well in character and very well written with good vocabularity no plot but something to think about. really good job! |
| Linia 2008-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good. I'm not a huge fan of Artemis Fowl fanfiction, but you did a very good job. |
| Opal Roseblossom 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is cute. I like it a lot. It's not very concise for a drabble, and that's my only crit. Great job! |
| winged-silhouette 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was REALLY good! I love your use of HEX color codes to describe colors of eyes, skin, etc.! It gave it a little irony! |