AWESOME! I love the story! It's so heart-provoking, I know there's alot of people who need to read it!

Wow. That was incredible, and it had me in tears.I love that movie, "Facing the Giants". You did a phenomeunal job. And I find it reassuring to know that there are fellow saved christian authors on this website. God bless you, in allthat you do.

John 3:16

Optimisticat

Best story for this catorgory that there is! I plan on writting a story soon, but now way will it be as good! You are an amazing writter-keep it up!

"What's impossible with God?"

"Nothing."

-Facing the Ganits.

Wow, very powerful, made me cry and really encouraged me. Nice job! Love seeing fanfics like this one, where people really use their talents to glorify God! Amazing!

Now this... was great. "Give me your heart!" Wow. That was the huge climax, right there.

You did a great job of building up to it and then concluding it. I liked the likening of those moments with his death crawl. And I especially liked how this felt original. :-)

Ariel_of_Narnia

i like your story - well done. did you see courageous as well

haha, amazing. Such a joyful-fic.

This is a great film and the death crawl moment really blows me away every time. You've managed to capture it all really well! Thank you for this :D

wow, it is truly amazing when you take in the glory of God. when someone realizes that Jesus is the son og God, and how much he loves us. and we can't even comprhend how much that is, but it still is absolutely inspiring.

its these small moments, like when i read this, that get into our heart.

i love that movie, but. this story, just, it just put new emphasis on it. thank you for writing it, and may God bless

that is so amazing. a great insight to brock. keep it up, this is great.

I enjoyed this story very much. Brock seemed very much in character and I liked getting "into his head" in regards to what all was happening during this period of time. I think you did a marvelous job with this. I especially appreciate how Brock was able to equate the lesson of the death crawl to the spiritual battle he was facing. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story! It has inspired me to watch the movie again. :)

Wow...this was amazing. As I read this, I felt like I WAS Brock...this was exactly what I needed to read. God's been telling me the exact same thing he was telling Brock. I think I really started to listen just now. Thank you.