I LOVED your fanfic! You strayed away from everyone elses views of Bella and thats what made this story so interesting... I really hope that you decide to write more in the future =)

Aw. That was a sweet ending. I'm glad Bella and Edward got married. I'm also glad that Claire and Melissa got together. It's nice to see everyone have a happy ending.

Great Story,
HBW or Julia E*

OMG. i love it. amazing!

very cute story overall
:)

good story all together, although I kept thinking of where Edward was during the times that she was getting into trouble, I wouldn't think that he would allow her to let her self go like that, I liked the part where she ran to "room 13" because it tied things together, but where was Edward? Why wouldn't he have heard the thoughts of the mexican guy and stopped her when she headed for the smoking area? Was he trying to let her learn in her own way? it just doesn't seem like something Edward would do.

But I really did enjoy your story, I am glad you created a story like this because there are very few out there. : )

when I saw the name of the chapter, i thought to myself, uh-oh, not good. This should get interesting, how is Edward going to react, he is from the early 1900's he wont be able to understand what Bella is going through and he is probably not going to be happy about her having affections for someone else, ESPECIALLY A GIRL! not good I feel so bad for both Edward and Bella its going to get really complicated.

This DD could be really bad for her getting better, hopefully she doesn't slip into anything even worse than weed, but I kinda see that coming up soon... I'm hoping Edward will be able to save her from herself.

WOW!

eck! He must be frusterated, worried, and so angry! and now she is taking x, he is going to know! She is going to have a very hard time to explaining herself. But as we all know Edward will blame himself! wow! just WOW! k I'm gonna go and read the next chapter now!

You asked if I liked it? I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! and I love how you added her hearing his voice in there that was perfect.

GOOD JOB **!

okok i know im a little late in the reading cause im
only up to chapter 13..but is mellissa..u know a lesbian?

ps luv ur story

this isnt the endding right :'(
oh well , great idea and everyuthing :)♥


lve a message is u want

Deseray♥

OHMYJASPER i love this story its going in my favs you made me cry!

great story but the only question i have is were u a druggy or did u just hang out with ppl who did drugs?