Although it was full of fairytale cliches and an occasional grammatical error here and there, I would still say, THAT was quite a nice piece of work.

I would love to hear a story about Princess Andrea rising through the ranks of Hell's spawn to become Maiden Of Anguish, Andariel.

when you started talking about Roland not loving either of them when they cared much 4 him i acctually teared up!

overall a brill story well done)

WTF?

That doesnt make any sense

"tear drop" you weaved a beautiful story. LOL. anyways. great sure have a great mind and great talents. i only wish more people knew about your skills. and i certainly wish you would continue the starcraft fic you wrote! CONGRATS for writing such a good story. you should consider publishing some stories :D have a nice day.

Piece it together? Does Andy "have a cup of tea" and break his neck too?

...not really...much love to Diablo...

Twas okay...I didn't know they had apartments back then...lol

Beautifully written. But it could be a lot better if you could emphasize more on Andariel's feelings toward her sister and Roland. It was just like something out of a fairy tale. Try to put lines between your paragraphs.

Once again, this is beautifully written.

this is one dark and twisted story

its real nice and creative too

i like how you showed what emotions are capable of

hope you write more

Awesome. You're writing's as twisted as they come and that's how I like em. *Sigh*. You know I really feel sorry for the girl. Don't we all have a neck that we'd like to see broken?

Impressive. Very impressive.

Nice twist... I like twisted fairy tales
As for one of the earlier reviewers' comments about a Mary Sue... didn't make much sense.

It might be Izual but Izual was made after Andariel plus he was never trusted by hell.

I liked this. It took me a minute to figue the jester out. The I saw the pattern..

It's Izual, right? I know im right.

Hee hee hee...

Anyway, good story.

Izzy, Isac, Ian Zual Izual.

Good story. One question... Is Isaac or Izzy really Diablo, Baal or Mephisto?

This is too depressing. Ugh, it's too good, but too sad. This story can only be summed up as a lovely tragedy. Perfecto