Whoa the teeth thing, that freaked me out.

This was simply beautiful. So well written, great pace. And you managed to capture the allure of Twilight and still make it fresh (and delighfully darker and, dare I say, more honest?) Loved it! Thanks for writing...now on to the sequel, woohoo!

I wouldn't call this chapter smut, honestly. Because that, my dear, is some solid, honest writing. Fantastically well done. No cliches, so creative, lovely prose. Can't wait to dive into this story and the sequel!

Well done thanks again to the cullen boys anon. for putting it up as one of there fav. reads.

I've been reading this story all day, and it was SO WORTH IT!

Oh my gosh, I'm crying now. I really shouldn't read fics at night before bed because it always seems that I connect more to them emotionally at night. It's like the later it gets, the more my guard goes down.

I loved every word of this. The sweetness and the smut in the beginning chapters was great, but the plot twist and the heart-wrenching note from Bella at the end were what really made the story. I'm appalled that a story of this calibre doesn't have more reviews.

One of the best things about this story is that the characters are actually in character. They are completely entwined to the characters of the books and this story could easily take off where Eclipse ended. Actually, I would have much better preferred this story as the ending.

I'm on to read about this sequel you speak of and am greatly intrigued.

Fantastic writing.

OMG i literally cried laughing at this chapter!
I must say u are a brillant writer, lolz cant wait to read the rest=]

Sammy,

You are an amazing writer and I very much enjoyed this wonderful story (the 3rd of yours that I've read). Now I'm going to jump into the sequel, which honestly, I'm sort of dreading. I recently read a fanfic (Gravity) where Bella didn't remember her human life and I was in a funk for days over it. I'm hoping your similarly themed sequel to this story will be much kinder to me.

This fic comes highly recommended and I've finally gotten a chance to read it!

I love the set-up of this! Not because of the smut (though it was very well-written) but rather because of the complete innocence of Edward and Bella. It captures the essence of their canon-selves extremely well and presents a situation never seen in the books with a wonderful blending of the two.

I love the naivety and innocence of it all, as well as the thrill of danger as Edward struggles to control his darkest instincts.

Great story. I now have to read the sequel.

I really enjoyed this story! And I will read the sequel! I just have one comment or criticism, if you will... When Edward reads Bella's first journal and he asks "Is this how women really think," I mean, wouldn't he know better than anyone, since he can hear how EVERY woman other than Bella thinks?

Firstly I loved this story and am about to start Citizen Erased.A lot of new things to think about since reading your version here.I thought your take on their adjustments to being sexual together were very good and realistic.And Edward was still Edward.I totally agree with the 90210 thing.Before I knew RPatz had the role,when I read the books I had Jason Priestly as Edward in my brain.I already "knew" Rob as here in Oz we get UKTV and we had seen Robs TV film,The Haunted Airman and kept it on tivo because I loved it so much so had watched it numerous times by the time the Twi cast was announced.I could immediately see Rob was the perfect Edward and after seeing the movie,I had no trouble seeing Rob in my brain when rereading the saga.I kicked Jason out and let Rob in,lol.But,yep,he is very "Brandonish" in my opinion.

This is just... Wow. I mean, wow! Incredibly hot AND realistic, true to character, perfect dialogs, funny parts too... One of the best fanfics I've read! Thank you so much!

I just found (and read in one sitting) your fic and wanted to tell you how delightful it is. I think my favorite line was "And that was how Edward Cullen got me drunk," because it was so unexpected and funny, but I enjoyed every chapter. Caught myself laughing aloud a couple of times and was most impressed with the way that you expressed Bella's reactions to Edward's unreasonable flares of temper. I intend to read Citizen Erased, as well as your other fics--I am officially a fan of yours now. Thanks for the story!

I absolutely loved the story. I found your writing style 'real' & well paced, & I totally got lost in it.

I especially enjoyed Virgin Bella so much, because most of the fanfic out there depicts her as a girl who has fabulous sex in the most amazing ways - all smiles & orgasms & having it so ridiculously easy - despite being inexperienced. I just know it doesn't work like that! So thank you.