Please continue good story so far

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

really goood start to your story and hope you update it soon

more please

I think that you really have a good story started here and i hope to read more please

Good Luck With Everything

I hope harry brun snake face and his slaves to hell

good start cool an heir story

Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!

the fic is great, put harry and hermione together without ginny, and please send snake face to hell

Wow, this is interesting so far. Who is the Black Knight? Some of the stories have the original black knight as one of Arthur's daughters, another says it is Galahad, and yet ANOTHER said it was Lancelot trying to make amends for what he did. So, who will it be? Or will it be the descendant of one of the Knights of the Round Table.

Another point of interest...is this daughter of Arthur's, also the daughter of Guinevere? Will, you have Lancelot innocent of what the legends say him to be-read:the OTHER man?

POST MORE ASAP!

Love ya,

Sam

great

Harry needs to take Hermione with him when goes to train.

Okay. First off, putting a period at the end of a dialogue with said 'whoever' isn't proper. It's either a comma, or exclamation or question mark you can use. Sorry, my pet peeve is grammar.

Start a new paragraph every time someone speaks. Just watch for grammar. If you have Word, there should be a grammar check somewhere.

And, I have been studying the legend of King Arthur for years and have worked at Medieval Faire's with King Arthur as the theme. I have played various King Arthur characters. I'll be watching to see how you use the legend, and which version and what not. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. .

your history is great i'm specting the update and harry and hermione go togheter

your history is very good, i'll waite for the update soon and put together harry and hermione, and make ron and ginny piss off their side and led them by happy and you destroy snake ass