I think you really captured both characters perfectly. I love how comfortable they are together in your story. They always seem to surprise eachother, even on the show. I picture Jessica as a baker too, though we have no proof of that.

Adorable. I loved it.

"The Angell bakery."

A woman after Flack's heart -- or stomach.

Very cute

very cute.

I could totally see that going further if you really wanted it too. It was a great one-shot, but it would also make a good prologue or first chapter...just a thought. But I'm just a huge fan of Flack and Angell and Flack/Angell, so I just like it when good fics about them come through...

I liked this one and I hope you'll keep writing. Flack and Angell are an interesting pair and they work because of their flirtatious banter. She can match his wit every time - Great job!

I really liked this story, with all the light banter between Flack and Angell, particularly with "Chase Utley? Sounds like a bank," said Flack. "Where do I bank? Why at Chase Utley, of course", and her bringing cookies from "The Angell bakery". Seems very typical for them that they're using the stakeout to start flirting with each other. They're a great couple, and I do hope you'll write more for them in the future!

I really liked this, it's short but sweet. Keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed it! I love Flack, and I'm really enjoying seeing him with Angell who is also a character I like for her strength of mind. I love how you portrayed them in this story. Their dialogue was excellent, each matching the other for wit, '"Current?" Flack nodded. "It's a toss up between Ryan Howard and Chase Utley."
"Chase Utley? Sounds like a bank," said Flack. "Where do I bank? Why at Chase Utley, of course."' Perfectly Flack :)
Really nice descriptions too of each other, and how things move along for them. the cookes were brilliant, and what a name for a bakery, '"They're delicious. What bakery are they from?"
"The Angell bakery."' Which of course is just perfect for Flack ;)
I really enjoyed this, and the last line finished it off just right. Excellent!