You're good at writing drama. I admire that. I love drama so so so much. There's not much else I can say about this, except that Skeed must really hate Almarde. She was more than a homewrecker; she probably disturbed his impregnable pride (hehe), his relationships, and his idea of the world. She probably did a ton to his psyche growing up... It's no wonder he wanted to kill her.

Good work on this one. Keep it up!

VERY nice; great imagery. (It's better than my shitty one by far, haha.) Skeed's in-character- just as much of an ass as ever, amirite?- and I like how you portray Alma through his eyes.