 miki230 2009-11-26 . chapter 14I Love U! Thank you I so love this story! Thank you for the bonus, Mugen as a dad is perfect! |
 furousha 2009-11-26 . chapter 14aw! I smiled all the way through the epilogue! So sweet! and all those babies. :D The thought of the boys messing with Jin makes me snicker.
Great job and thanks for this fun chapter! |
 jazzispsycho 2009-11-25 . chapter 13this was a beautiful story! I loved IT! NEW PLEASE EPILOGUE!EPILOGUE!EPILOGUE!EPILOGUE! |
 Browneyedmami 2009-11-17 . chapter 13this was a beautiful story! I loved the progression between the two, and I'm glad Jin wasn't left out. great job! |
 Pinkie 2009-11-15 . chapter 13 I love this story. I want to know what happens next. |
 Luv4Uncas 2009-11-12 . chapter 13I'm so sad that its over but its okay because it was amazing!
EPILOGUE!EPILOGUE!EPILOGUE!EPILOGUE! Please write an EPILOGUE!
I hope its got Fuu going into labor with her and Mugen's first baby! That would be awesome!
Please make a series of oneshots, like Mugen getting jealous over some guy who likes Fuu, Mugen jealousy oneshots are hilarious! Or even a oneshot about Mugen telling Fuu about the Ryukyu's. That would be intense! Thanks again for the wonderful writing and the creativity that you have shown us! I hope that you write more Fuu and Mugen stories! Thanks and I'll check back to see if you write more! Later! |
 Tiffany 2009-11-12 . chapter 13 EPILOGUEEPILOGUEEPILOGUEEPILOGUE!
PLEASE! |
 miki230 2009-11-12 . chapter 13KIDS KIDS KIDS! That would be sweet! Mugen as a dad! |
 furousha 2009-11-12 . chapter 13i have been waiting for this! and i teared up while reading it. SUCH A GREAT ENDING! :3
i'm glad you showed the change in Mugen, as you stated, things change. people change. that's how the world works.
now i think i'm going to go read this story all over again. and yes, write plenty of MuxFuu one-shots! you could maybe write some that happen after this story? *throwing out ideas* |
 nsomniacartist 2009-11-01 . chapter 12Ah! Cliff hanger XD! |
 miki230 2009-09-14 . chapter 12so awesome. i cant wait to see if fuu is ok! |
 Mistress 0f Dragons 2009-08-30 . chapter 12“You don’t touch what’s mine,” Mugen said in a strained angry voice, “Never.” (I loved that line).
Good chapter. Although I noticed a couple of errors.
Your moving to England? Cool.
Oh hey, question: How come you didn't send this chapter for me to edit? |
 ancim 2009-08-29 . chapter 12yeah! i am so happy you are going to finish this and congrats on englad i hope you have a wonderful time and send me a virtual postcard. ciao |
 furousha 2009-08-29 . chapter 12i have been waiting patiently for this chapter! :D very nice fight scene. i loved it and i can't wait to see what happens next! |
 Luv4Uncas 2009-08-29 . chapter 12Yay, I've been waiting so long! I'm glad that Juro got his in the end, now if only Fuu wakes up they can have a party!! In the epilogue I would like to see some more cute moments between Fuu and Mugen! Update soon! |