Nice story so far. I am a fan of Silent Hill myself. I like the connections to Heather (or should I say, Cheryl) and the other Silent Hill characters mentioned in the timeline at the beginning of the chapter. I can't wait to read more of this. Keep up the good work!

Sorry I couldn't review this earleir, busy witht he Fourth of July weekend things.

Well, this seems very good so far. I like the brief summary of all the previous SIlent Hill games.

Alas, I have not been able to play any of them (my folks are damn strict concerning M games, >.

It's a well-done start to the story. I like the quick overview of the past events to help bring readers up to speed. The action is crisp and it's clear you have a good understanding of Silent Hill. It sounds more like Morgan has a form of Asperger syndrome rather than autism though.

It's very good so far, and I hope to see more soon.