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Dudly
2009-03-29 . chapter 1
// “Rory and I kept her in the bathtub for a couple of days, and it was nice, and everything was great, and then she died. And it was a very trying experience, and I just don’t think I’m ready to go through it again.”

“You know, most people kill the fish and eat them.”

“Yeah. What’s up with that?”//

*giggles* Oh, I love this. And the ending? XDD Very very nice. XDD I really love your Luke and Lorelai voices. n_n It's like reading transcripts of the episodes. *beams* And having seen a grandiose amount of 10 episodes, I can kid myself into thinking it's canon. Isn't that great? =D

dudly xx
xxtheoneyoudreamaboutxx
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
This is really cute! you really captured the charators there.
Good work!! *goes to see if you have more like it*
Emily
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
nothing has ever brought me more joy or happiness!
hondagirl
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
This actually made me laugh. You've captured Luke and Lorelai really well. As I was reading, I was picturing them saying this and it totally worked. Especially the jacket line. :)

-honda
CRASHxin2xME
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
oh man, that was GREAT. nice work there.
Chrissy
2008-07-10 . chapter 1
cute
19Kristyn94
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
Cute! Hee hee. Chortle is not a word I hear often. It aggrivates my dad because everytime I text him I either put *giggles* or *chortles*...
nightwatchman2009
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
ha ha this is perfect! I love how it was just dialogue..and really that's all it needed. It was really funny and I think you nailed Luke and Lorelai. lol good job.
HiddenFlame42
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
HAHAHA amazing. I could hear their voices clearly while I read. You've captured the characters well. Great job on this! :)
LJ Fan
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
Anything else that's hiding from a couple of months ago? ;) I love your L/L stuff. You've got the personalities down great. Ever think about writing a REAL ending to the series? I would only trust you.
MorgauseNokami
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
Oh, Lorelai
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