Tell you what, it's not the yuri that bothers me. I'm not overly fond of it, but I don't discriminate for that sort of thing. It's not even the incest. Somewhat disturbing, but tolerable. What gets me is the paedophilia. I'm sorry, but I just have to say it. I have read about serial murder and a fair few of those sickos were paedophiles. Paedophilia truly is a terrible thing. But enough doom and gloom. Surely I have something nice to say? Something to reassure you that your efforts weren't wasted on twisted souls like me? Well, I'll try not to disappoint here.

You describe well. Being that I hate this sort of thing, it seriously bothered me. However, to people that like it, it will probably be pleasant. I'm not other people, I'm guessing here. So take my disgust as a compliment.

Few, if any, mistakes. I like when people have a good sense of spelling and grammar.

All in all, I came into this truly out of my depth. To be honest, I wasn't really sure that you were serious when you said CremiaxRomani. You've certainly cured my naivity on that sort of thing. I don't like it, I'll be honest with you on that. But I certainly respect it. I was nice even though I didn't like it. No flame from me.

It was well written... but kinda strange. Umm... yeah.

Ok person that is just plain nasty. lil sis big sis pairings! Yuri is nasty but that hypes the level! nasty nasty nasty

Ah! I've read this masterpiece on the Zelda Yaoi Fanfic Archive... and I have to say, when I first read it I was highly impressed... I loved it! Now that I find you on , I'll proudly add you to my favorites list...

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more*GGAASSPP
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more*FAINTSSS*

I KNOW, I know! I'm very late in reviewing this! But I've never seen it before! Your writing is so original, and you've taken a subject that could be abused so terribly, and made a beautiful story about it! You should do a sequel!

NOBODY ELSE REVIEWED THIS! GRRRRR! You did a really good job. You should consider doing a second chapter. Just a suggestion! This is really weird of me, I would usually be against this kind of story, but you just did this really well.