well I'm glad you're back! This was a wonderful chapter!

Cool awesome. Loved it.

Omg! I've jsut found this fic and I am in love! Seriously! I'm loving all the little flashbacks!! Please write more and update soon!!

I'm really happy to see update this. It was a blast reading about the two sisters in their younger years.

Good first chapter. Very interesting.

Love the interaction between the sisters. Glad you've decided to update this. Hope for some more flashback scenes.

I'm really enjoying this story so far, it would have been great to have seen Addie's family in Grey's.

Glad to see that you've updated this fic. The characters as kids are adorable.

Lovely update!

It may have only been a little Maddison but it was worth waiting for it. Loved how he could see that she was hurting more than she was letting on and that Mark seems to understand her relationship with her sister. It was nice to see that even with all this on her mind she still noticed how Mark as changed. When he repeated that once a manwhore always a manwhore line of hers I was starting to think that maybe hes still bitter about her leaving. I really hope thats not the case.

Well, just a little Maddison, but I take what I can get. Thanks, another great chapter. I'd have liked for it to be longer, but it as really good.

Thanks and update soon

The second to last line was great. I love your description and hope for more great Addison moments

Very good, I liked this, and I liked the moments, awkward and painful as they were between Mark and Addison, as well as the very painfully described moment when she sees Meredith. I really felt for her then. I loved the line at the end, 'She sat in the chair beside her sister’s bed, carefully arranged so no part of her was touching Ariel, but close enough to hear her breathing.' Excellent.

I really like this. Love the flashbacks.
Maddison love, please hahahaha
Update soon

Brilliant chapter, you write the characters just amazingly, and you have a fantastic grasp on relationships, and the sometimes cold reality of marriages and what they mean. Very powerful line about the three separate people, including even Ariel in that. Loved how you wrote the coming toger of the marriage, and you summed Harrison up in just a few pointed sentences. I loved Vivien in this, and the change she has now gone through. Looking forward to more :)