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| Naruto the cat king 2008-09-01 ch 4,  | abuseinteresting story so far please update soon, and i would like to learn more about Ranma's time in the elementle countries |
| Princess Asuna 2008-08-29 ch 4, | abusegreat story keep it up ^^ |
| Raven Marcus 2008-08-28 ch 1, | abuseNot bad! I like it! |
| NeroSparda 2008-08-25 ch 4, | abuseAs much as I hate the fact Ranma is totally, no matter how hot she is, I'm hella liking this story. So, I hope that you update soon, ja ne. |
| conlan0414863 2008-08-25 ch 4, | abusenice story |
| JJK9 2008-08-23 ch 4, | abuseWait no Jutsu? Im guessing she's saving them as a surpise to overwhelm the enemy, afer all I'll hate this story if you say she cant use them. Genma is getting more and more evil every chapter, I wonder what other terrible plans he has. Good chapter, keep on writing. |
| Lady Hilde Swashbuckler 2008-08-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseM last chapter was better. Your grammer was going kinda haywire in the middle. I do love an OverPowered Ranma though. and Ranma/Ryoga romance is always appreciated. Akane being conditioned it actually rather interesting. Anyway, Til next time |
| ranma girl 14 2008-08-22 ch 4, | abuseExcellent chapter, I can't wait to see what with Ukyo next! ^-^ plz plz plz update fast! ^o^ |
| Firehedgehog 2008-08-22 ch 4, | abusegenma must die! soo continue |
| de bombz 2008-08-22 ch 4, | abuseNice chapter except for some typo's but you seemed to catch most of them. Also do what YOU want with the pairings. It's your story not theirs so you do what YOU want with it. If they don't like it they don't have to read it. Keep up the good work and also I would like to say you balanced the chapter length to the amount of time it's released pretty well. Although I said I wanted you to do what you want with the story I would like to see a Ranma/Ryoga pairing. Again your story you do what you want with it. Also don't listen to that one guy who said people will flame you if you make this a Ran/Ryo fic becuase they happen to be very popular and you can find a lot of them all over the internet. No one will flame you and he is completely wrong with what he said and he has no facts to prove what he said. Watch out for people like him he might try to manipulate the story into what he wants to see. Only take peoples advice if it's reasonable and constructive. Again good work expect to see another chapter in two to three days. |
| Dragon Man 180 2008-08-22 ch 4, | abuseMan, if Ranma can get Naruto and the rest of the Rookie nine to help her out Genma is in deep trouble. But how come Akamaru hasn't come with Ranma? Please don't have killed him off, Ranma should be able to pamper him to a ripe old age and help him raise and train several litters of ninja puppies! |
| Jerry Unipeg 2008-08-22 ch 4, | abuseI LOVE THIS CHAPTER! (*x5) Well done in the battle. |
| sandcrawlr 2008-08-22 ch 4, | abuseLiking the story, keep it up. |
| Bobboky 2008-08-22 ch 4, | abusecool |
| AshK 2008-08-22 ch 4, | abuseNice work as always! Keep the great work coming! Sincerely, AshK |