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Reviews for: What I Can't Tell You
Emalin
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
Oh, my. This made my face wrinkle up 'til I looked like a kinrath pup!

What a perfect companion piece to your other oneshot "Norm for a Scoundrel". Short, but full to the brim with yummy introspection, and ending with a killer last line. I love how you paint the relationship between the exile and Atton: the exile wants Atton to be happy; Atton wants the exile to be safe from harm.

Going to faves! :)
qt3.14159
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
This is really nice. I like the musings and her reflections.

As a side note, I also like your username... Aravis... ;)
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