hey!! how are ya! when are you going to update??!? you left us only with one chap don't be so bad!! XD hope to see you soon...

Interesting first chapter. Look forward to the next one.

I see the story starts in their early teens, and Haruka in a dress^^ Michiru must've walk fast to have followed Haruka in their car, its like she's full of surprises:)

Well... I for one think that the Michiru in your story does not really resemble the personality of the real Michiru... anyway your plot got me interested so I think I'll read it...

Can't wait for the next chapie...ja ne!

Michiru is a supernatural being? Anyhows, nice start. I hope you write more...and uh, the way you write it's kinda obvious you're a male. Or at least, I think you are. Oh no, wait, I saw your profile. Okay, you are lol.

update soon :)

update soon! ^^