 sotroublesomeST 2008-07-14 . chapter 5no! wtite more! i want to know what happens! plse!?! |
 sotroublesomeST 2008-07-12 . chapter 2i really like it! ^^ rens funny, as usual, and horo is funny as usual and yoh is funy as usual...GREAT JOB! ^^ |
 sotroublesomeST 2008-07-12 . chapter 1what did they do last night *evil smirk* i like it! ^^ i'll keep reading ^^ |
 Pulchrite 2008-07-11 . chapter 5This smells like sabotage...
I think each chapter is an improvement from the one before it. You're doing a good job, and I'm still interested in reading more. |
 Pulchrite 2008-07-05 . chapter 2Interesting. I immediately thought "gargoyles" when I read it. I wonder if these physical abnormalities are permanent, or if they can be controlled. And, how will they affect their shaman abilities? I'll guess I'll have to keep reading. :) |
 Pulchrite 2008-07-04 . chapter 1It's an interesting concept, and I would like to see what the actual powers are. As far as structure goes, it was a bit difficult to read, and for the upcoming chapters it would be nice for you to be more descriptive.
I like it. |