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| Queen S of Randomness 016 2008-07-09 ch 4,  | abusehey! i like this story so far! i hope u update soon! :) |
| CherryProductions 2008-07-07 ch 4, | abuseThe storyline's alright besides the character personality . In truth, they don't act like that. 1.Like Mira isn't that self consious and she wouldn't be afraid to return to work. She would be afraid to make eye contact with Buzz if she really feels that way, but not stay at the Palace for two months without giving reason to it. 2.Buzz would worry about Mira, yes, but he is that sort of clueless guy to a woman's heart. So Mira's strange behavior could all be a fever to his understanding. 3. You never gave real detail of Mira falling in love with Buzz at all. No attraction, no sort of bonding, nothing besides the second chapter when they held each other. Just don't try hurrying up the process of the fanfiction. I love a Buzz/Mira pairing too. And there isn't enough out on the net to read up on. Don't give up on this fic and try slowing down a little bit. Sorry if you take offense to this but I just had to say this. |
| SamCarter93 2008-07-04 ch 3, | abuseOh, please continue! Love the songs, esp. "If I Never Knew You", and love the story. There aren't enough Buzz/Mira fics out there! Great job! ~Jess |