Very nicely written. You have an unusual pairing. but I can see how it would work

Jag älskar denna pairingen och detta passar in i storyn perfekt. Så glad att du skrev detta!

Betty

WOW.
This was beautifully written. It was great how they both fell in love with each other that night and how Mac could have stayed in that room for eternity and been fine but power to her independent side.

THis was amazing. Really.

i liked it all the MaDi and i love how you added a bit of veronica and Logan in the end

Nice way for them to get together.

I loved the MaDi scene here. It would be cool to read if they had anything to do with Veronica and Logan getting back together. Great story.