That was absolutely perfect.

very sweet (and original as far as season 4 post eps go)! It's well written and you really captured the characters and their gestures. Present tense isn't my favorite, and was a bit distracting but everything else was RIGHT ON in my opinion!

Wow. That was really amazing. :) I could just hear the voices in my head, you wrote them exactly the way they talk. I really loved this.

awe! that was perfect. instead of the creepy dwangela sex we were hit with @ the season finale, we should of had this scene. very well done.

that was so cute, i loved the ending. I LOVE JAM!

I love it!! I love the proposal on the road.

this was so adorable and amazing! i liked the references to other episodes in there. it was very well-written, and i love how it was as if Jim knew why Pam was upset. great job!

Wow, that was...amazing. I loved it and I really hope to see more from you soon.

That was great!

Please write more!