Aww!! Of course Derek would be the one to save her. :P This was tres magnifique! =]

very good job! and I could imagine Nora being that oblivious

loved it update soon

Wonderful ending. I liked the first chapter but I connected with the second chapter. What can I say, darker fics that offer some light at the end of the tunnel appeal to me. Nicely done.

That was beautiful.
I hope you continue, this is a very dark and yet great Dasey angsty story...
~LBW~

YAY TO THE AMAZING CHAPTER! ^_^ I can't wait for the next one! ^_^

Please update soon?? Sounds interesting. I wanna know what happened.

Nice. I'm so glad that you added something to this. It was so sad. The second chapter didn't take the angst out of it or make it suddenly happy, but it did insert some hope into the whole thing. Great job.

*sits and waits for the next chapter.* I shall wait for the next chapter of this amazing story! ^_^

I really, really liked this. I mean, despite its lack of Dasey and solution, it totally rocks. You managed to describe how she was feeling almost perfectly. Great job =]

One little note, though: "No body" is actually one word. And, "This is ridiculous*,*" *s*he'd said quietly...

Other than those few errors, though, I really, really enjoyed this. :)

Great job.

I like it. Umm just wondering if you stop writing "the invisible" i was waiting for the next chapter for awhile now. so i'm just wondering if i should stop waiting?