 VIITheChariot 2009-08-10 . chapter 4Wow, I was never much into the Avatar fanfiction (Shipping wars scare me, okay?) but yours is really good! I especially liked the part with the notes on the locker.
Jet: "Bow-chicka-wow-wow."
Real cute and seemed very readable, if that makes ANY sense. And I think you captured their characters well :) |
 The Cookie Thief 2009-07-07 . chapter 4I'm laughing sofa king hard.
Write more or I'll kick your ass. |
 pagelupin 2009-05-07 . chapter 4It sucks that your not continuing with this. It's really funny and I just love it. |
 AprilUnderground 2009-04-19 . chapter 4HA! Haha! HAHAHAHHA!
THAT WAS HILARIOUS!
Egg Partners...genius!
PURE GENIUS!
Gotta love agnst and hilarity at the same time :D |
 Darktayle 2009-04-16 . chapter 2'He doesn't even have a moustache!'
xD
I usually prefer Kataang to Zutara, but this is hilarious. The whole moustache thing kind of reminds me of something by GanXingBa on youtube. |
 Liooness 2009-04-08 . chapter 4hehe, love the concet and can't wait for all the mayhem to begin. great chapter, and don't worry, i live too |
 zutarababe 2009-03-09 . chapter 4lol sokka... hes so dramatic i luv him... xD |
 fuzzball-de-goof 2009-03-01 . chapter 4the thing about Sokka and the ground floor cracked me up, honestly i laughed so hard i got a really odd look from my dog XD |
 ThumperMiggles 2009-03-01 . chapter 4LIVE. |
 Divokoza 2009-03-01 . chapter 4 I suck at reveiwing, but hey!
Nice one :D |
 zukoxluver 2009-02-28 . chapter 4aww this is so cute! i can't wait for more!! |
 TrueThinker 2009-02-28 . chapter 4“WAS IT HEADS OR TAILS!?” Sokka shouts. Haru raises an eyebrow. I don’t think Sokka realized that we were on the ground floor and Haru could hear us perfectly fine.
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That was the best line. Just because Sokka IS sometimes that stupid.
Haha, Tybalt was my idea XD |
 Joseph Santiago 2008-12-17 . chapter 3love this |
 Oh1 2008-11-14 . chapter 3 UPDATE! Please... :-) |
 Neko4 2008-09-09 . chapter 3wat going to happen next |