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Reviews for: Epiphany
Whiskers-san
2008-11-18 . chapter 1
T-T aww, it was so sad... and yet so well written... I loved it!
xxdarknessxfallsxx
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
Angsty indeed.

May I take a moment to say "Hello again, Elric-Chan!" Do you remember me? That's quite alright if you don't. But my god, do the years of experience make us better writers or what? I clicked on the first thing on your profile just so I could review and let you know of my exsistance and I have to admit, this was fantastic and Yaoi is not my usual cup of tea (but for deathnote, yaoi mostly works out with every guy, pretty much. The creators published the series and said "Let the yaoi fangirls COME.")

I found your profile again through "Rachel in the World of FMA" in my review history (Brings back some heartwarming flame-filled memories, doesn't it?) and I have to admit, compared to your older stuff, the newer stuff is much more articulate, more descriptive, the flow of things works. In this, the idea of Light realizing he loved L right before death and then writing his own name in a deathnote was wonderful.
Not that the old stuff was bad, it wasn't, but even you can agree the new stuff is better. And for that, I applaude.

I'll probably poke around your other stories later. Just at a glance I saw FMA, Deathnote and Naruto, so I'll have to take a peek at what you've been up to after you stopped writing for Rachael. (You never posted the next chapter that you said "I would like" and that made me a little sad. -tear- )
udhinasasa
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
I finally watched the anime ending this Saturday. And I preferthis ending to it. :D
xkidrogue
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
-sobs- OMG! I liked it, I hated it, I loved it! Wonderful. This would have been a much better ending than in the actual anime. I adore it.
Kuri-san
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
That was terrific. It seemed like something that would be in the anime. (If it were to end in an LightxL way)

I also wanna see the new deathnote movie, what about you?

Keep on writing and working hard.
-Kuri.
PenArtist10000
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
Great!
Hunter Kitty
2008-07-05 . chapter 1
Aww! That was so nice! I love that ending line! It just seems to wrap everything up so well. Heck, the entire thing is great! Lights thoughts go really well, and...and...It's just really awesome. XD
Awesome job! -virtual high five-
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