That's precious.

Well done!

Hmm...I could see Peter the Worrywort sending out an army to look for his brother, and then Edmund the Moody emerging, sheepish, from a ballroom, suspiciously tired from his secret dancing, while Lucy the Impish looks on in amusement.
Great job!

I'm actually grinning as I write this, because it's perfectly brillant. Both Lucy and Ed were in-character and the idea was brilliant. I like the idea of either Ed being brilliant or horrific at dancing, he just doesn't seem the type to be ok at it. Anyway, the idea was sweet and well written and it was just brilliant.

Oh this is utterly adorable. I think one of the layers of ice around my heart just melted definitely faving this!

I love Edmund, he's my fav character, and I'm very VERY happy to see that he can dance.

Aww! That's completely adorable hahaha. Nice job!

YOu should have put in the Ed embarrassed part I'd be embarrassed.

Aw! That was so sweet!
lol. Lu's second to last line was hilarious! Poor Su and Pete! XD

XD I can imagine Ed dancing...actually, I'm doing it right now, and he's so cute! LOL.
Rock on! This was so adorable! U *U
Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D)

Oh my, this is so cute! I'd love to see a little sequel. Maybe Lucy convinces Edmund to dance at a ball, just once? Or, the older siblings catch them at it, or it turns out they've been secretly watching all along? Sorry. Inspiration went wild. Anyways, great little piece! (And if you decide to do a little sequel, I will of course jump up and down, dance in victory, then bake you a mountain of cookies...me, bribe anyone, of course not! Much love and adoration!

Ahh that was cute. Where is he practicing at? I love how you never had Edmund say a word, it worked very well with the story. I could see him react that way.

Thanks for writing

Wildfire

Aww, how sweet! I like the idea of Ed secretly being a good dancer.

this story is really cute! _ . perhaps you could make a sequel to it? like one party on the balcony outside you can hear the music and lucy and edmund dance and susan and peter see them but don't say a word about it, just smile.

sorry it's probably a bad idea, i'll shut up now, the story rocks though _

Cute i like it

*Grins hugely* i LOVED it!

How cute! And funny! I am adding this to my C2. Your characterizations were brilliant...I can't think of anything to say. It was that good

Keep writing!-Rain