Wonderful one-shot, short but beautiful to read. it sounds exactly like Tsume and I love that you mentioned Kiba and Toboe^^

this totally describes tsume. i like authors that can get into charry's heads... O.o no wait i phrased that wrong ACK!

nice story yourself. very cute.

wow thats deep.

good work on caputring Tsume's genteler side. it's cute and no longer than it needs to be. you covered all the nessary parts to make a good story. it's not to long nor to short.
excellent job.