This is a great story keep up the good work! But please follow my suggesstions from my previous reviews!

Aw, cute story! :D I normally don't like OC's but I really like Sandra. :3 Please update soon!

-EG

I love this keep it up! Please follow tips in my prevous reviews!

I love this fanficcy so far XD I mean, yeah, you've already passed this chapter awhile ago, but. Seriously. Awesomness XD lol. Oh, I just wanted to point something out to you. In the beginning, as you described Sandra, she had three limbs of two legs and one arm whereas in this chapter, you made it seem like she had two arms when she 'crossed her arms' and such. Just letting you know... >_> ^_^ hope I didn't make it seem like a flame or anything, just trying to be a little helpful.

["Makes me run like the wind, Bullseye!!"]

Nice reference. And Cloey's hilarious. I would be annoyed as heck, if I were to deal with her. haha!

Watch out for tenses. Like "-s", "-ed" and such. Past, present, future. Stick to ONE. :)

You did a wonderful job with the fluff. Don't be modest. haha! :)

Nice job on Randall's secret. Is it the same thing in the movie?

And you portrayed Randall realistically. You didn't make him a sterotypical bad boy/villain. You just made Randall Randall. :) It made him more believable and authentic. Most sterotypical villains would go "I WANT TO DESTROY THE WORLD" and they end up being 2-D characters. Keep up the good work. :)

Things are intensifying! :) You did a good job with Sandra's development. I really liked that. It made her character seem motherly, which is fitting and what Randall needs. :) ^^

When you talked about Sulley, it was a bit dry. It was good information and theory, but more elaboration would be much better. I know that Randall hates his guts, but a tiny more information would hit the spot. :) ^^

You're doing a wonderful job. :) ^^

Aw...! That was so cute and funny. :) Nice work. Don't be afraid to write longer fluff. It was adorable. :)

Oh, this might help you in your writing: "Show, not tell". Like... say Mike is angry. You wouldn't just write... 'then Mike was angry and said, "pumpus frogs! What did you do?!"' I would write...

[Mike rubbed his forehead, grinding his teeth in pure rage. Throwing his fist in the air, he yelled, "pumpus frogs! What did you do?!"]

But that's my over dramatization. XD haha!

Whenever I see Sandra learn more about Randall and she sees him in pain, it reminds me of the song "Cry" by Mandy Moore.

[It was late in September
And I'd seen you before
You were always the cold one
But I was never that sure
You were all by yourself
Staring up at a dark gray sky
I was changed

In places no one will find
All your feelings so deep inside
It was then that I realized
That forever was in your eyes
The moment I saw you cry

I wanted to hold you
I wanted to make it go away
I wanted to know you
I wanted to make your everything

Alright]

Do you think it fits? haha! Sorry if it's a bad connection. :P <3

Aw...! The argument was so cute! Kinda like "Pride and Prejudice" by Jane Austen. :3 Randall can be Sandra's Mr. Darcy and Sandra can be Lizzy! haha! That was a good character moment for Sandra. 5 points for characterization! *high fives*

haha! The part where she lived was HILARIOUS. Kinda reminds me of these two people... one's a girl, the other's a guy... they are in an elevator in a hotel. The girl thinks that the guy is cute, and the guy ask which floor she wants. She then tells her her room number accidentely, which then makes it awkward, but the guy then says, "Room 310 it is then. I'm going off on 608." haha! I love it...

Advice for this chapter: there was a repetition on the word "she", but didn't take away the writing. :)

That was a good first chapter. :) Sandra really seems interesting. I like her modest manners and the interaction between her and Randall. Sandra seems realistic. :)

All the technical stuff like grammar and such was alright... didn't see anything, so no feedback for you! :)

All and all this is an interesting story. Hoping to see more! ^^ *reads on* (Sorry if I don't get through the rest of the chapters tonight. :P I have a short attention span, but I'll try to get this done. :) ^^) Keep on writing! ^^

Nice story, but I would really like for you to continue Casper meets Dani. Would you update that story soon?

this story is awesome please continue it

YESS! An update! Nicely done, too, I might add, and it's already apparent that his little side project is taking a toll, emotionally, on Randall already.

OH, by the way, don't know if you know it or not, but Pixar IS planning a sequel to "Monsters, Inc.", due for release in either 2012 or 2013. Don't know if Randall will even be in it, but I've started a letter-writing campaign to try to get them to include him and to give him a second chance, rather than to rely on negative stereotyping and that worn-out Saturday morning kiddie cartoon formula of Good Guys Beat Up Bad Guys. You can read details over on Pixar Planet or on my DA page, or on the Boggs Board. We need all the Randall fans we can get to hopefully make this happen!

PitBull_Lady

This is great keep it up! I hope you follow my sugestions from preveus reviews! Please update soon!

It is comeing along great keep it up! I hope you follow the ideas in my perivous reviews.