 gaul1 2009-03-19 . chapter 1nice chapter, byes |
 Guardoflight 2008-10-21 . chapter 1Hm interesting concept I would love to see how this could pan out to see what happens |
 LiYinBlake 2008-10-05 . chapter 1Good start. Poor Ranma, he had better never wake up. |
 Kindred Of Twilight 2008-08-24 . chapter 1Interesting plot and character development. Is this a rewrite of your other fic mishapen destiny? Elsewise rather interesting
Hope to see more.
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 Jupiah 2008-08-13 . chapter 1Nice little story you've started here. It's rare to see a Ranma-locked fic where everyone actually behaves in character and that *gasp* has a surprisingly original plot!
I like your little backstory between the Musk and the Nichieju. It's interesting and doesn't contradict canon, and using the kettle as a cure for Ranma's condition certainly sounds plausible.
It's also nice to see there are authors out there that will admit that Genma actually cares for Ranma and can be clever occasionally. I hope you don't ham up the "Genma is extremely sexist" fanon for drama - Ranma is a tad sexist (though he's perfectly willing to fight a girl as a girl) but there's no evidence anywhere in the manga that Genma shares this belief.
All in all, excellent writing quality and a promising start. I'm keeping my eye on this fic, I hope you update soon! |
 DarkRubberNeck 2008-07-28 . chapter 1Such a great story, I wonder why there has been no updates yet? |
 Violet Shadows 2008-07-28 . chapter 1Pretty good, well written, original, and lacking the usual contrived plot device to facilitate the change. |
 akibara 2008-07-24 . chapter 1I stopped reading at 'ranko' =] |
 Willow-Bee the Cat 2008-07-17 . chapter 1Yeah, Ranma does have very good reason to be scared, doesn't he... uh, she. |
 KitsuneOverlord 2008-07-13 . chapter 1Interesting. I've sometimes wondered just what would happen if somebody actually got hot Cursed Spring water on them. Would they change? Would the curse break? It's good to see that somebody has decided to write a fic using that guestion.
Its a bit early to say, but this looks fairly good so far. Just don't have Ranma adapting too fast. Though, by saying that, I do not mean that you should overdose us all with massive surges of ANGST.
Keep up the good work!
P.S. I really hope that Shampoo's plan to hook up Ranma with Mousse will fail. I don't like the myopic duckman very much. |
 redsunS 2008-07-10 . chapter 1 Not bad. I see potential in this one. Although curse locked Ranma is not a new idea, this could be big depending on where you take it.
I like your writing style so far so I have confidence that the next installment will be even better. Keep up the good work. |
 Zoko 2008-07-08 . chapter 1Wow! An intersting idea to have Ranma try for a cure so early in the series, and that It was his fualt. Having Shampoo to help him with his new life. Though having Ryoga get lost after seeing them seem a little unusal. |
 chm01 2008-07-07 . chapter 1poor girl |
 ranma girl 14 2008-07-07 . chapter 1Seems like an ok start, but I hope that Ranma still goes to Nermia and doesn't stay in the village
plz update soon ^_^ |
 5 years of fun 2008-07-07 . chapter 1are you planning to drop this fic??
anyway, wihtout any fiancee's inteference this will slowly leads to a RankoXRyoga or Moussu..is it?? |