*heart*

Poor Aaralyn D: I feel bad for her, falling in love with THAT jackass... *kicks Shinoda* -w-

Still, Aaralyn/Whenua? I think I like the idea of that...but yeah, poor guy's losing another person he cared about D: I seriously need to give that guy some happiness in his life for once...first his wife dies right after Aki was born, and now this.

But yeah, nice job :D The last part was definitely my favorite, very sad D:

Beautiful. Completly beautiful, and the song fits it perfectly.

Saya is grateful -w-

Wow. My Zyvus Koriseva is an ASS. Seriously. I think he might end up becoming the new Shinoda or something XD

But wow, poor Lily. I can't imagine how she feels. Maybe I'll draw something of it. Hm...definite plot bunny for a drawing here...

But yeah, I think I might have to up the scale of pain he will be receiving later in APWT. And you pretty much got the scale of their society down pretty well. Hopeless, basically. I'd hate to live there...

Lol, glad it was able to inspire you! Keep writing! =D

THIS IS AWESOME!

:)

"Man date" lol.

Aw Keira don't do that! You have a beautiful daughter!