I really like this story so far. It was a pleasant surprise to find it. I like how you take dialog from the game and give a different meaning to them. Like when Eve and Carth meet outside the Ebon Hawk after she's seen the vision of Revan and Malak. The words are the same, but the meaning totally changes because of the events you added. It's a great touch to the overall story and you did it very well. Great job.
I can't wait to read more.

awesome!
keep it up
love how canderous is jealous and his reaction
love how carth doesn't appear to remember kissing her
update soon!

O_o
Very interesting
looking foward to more!

This is really good! Well done! I absolutely love your characterization of Eve/Revan, she seems very personified and complicated, sort of like a normal person dropped into exceptional circumstances, it's great! I’m really looking forward to seeing how you will write her finding out about being Revan.

I thought that you wrote Carth a little too childish in their argument in chapter 3, I know Carth tends to be suspicious but I don’t know, it just seemed you went a little too far considering he’s someone who’s been through two wars and lost a family. I just wouldn’t expect such a person to be that, I don’t know, whiney? I certainly don’t hold it against you though, I realize it was probably a very difficult section to write.

Still, as I said I have really enjoyed reading so far and I certainly am looking forward to reading more, keep it up!

Cheers.

Yay an update! And a good one at that! Keep up the good writing. I really like this story.

I like what you've written so far, interesting background story. Looking forward to reading more.

Good story. I don't read vey many KoTOR stories, but I actually like this one alot. Keep writing.

Very interesting start. I really liked your backstory. I hope to see more.