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| toffeepop 2008-08-29 ch 1,  | abuseThis is unbelievable good; I especially loved the lyrical style you used. It actually reminds me of works by a (very talented) New Zealand author we all study at school: ever heard of Witi Ihimaera? No? Never mind. Fantastic, anyway. |
| youkai chick supreme 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. a bit oddly worded, but not in a negative way. i do so love this pairing when they're young! it's so sweet on sev's part... loved the last part right before the little "epilogue" at the end. that was especially cute. |
| corinnacatz 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abuseaww what a sweet story! i really like your writing style-its very unique! |
| bugaboo107 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWhat a sweet, innocent little piece. It was very well-written. I loved that sense you give the reader, of being a onlooker peeking into a little snowglobe with these two lost souls. Aww. I have never read anything so... timeless. "Just slip out the window, sneak through the back door, and run away to it; but remember to send a note ahead, held in a beak or clutched in able talons, for solitude is not always the best asylum." Best lines. Off to find this sanctuary 'halfway to Spinner's End and halfway from Buckthorn Hollow.' |
| duj 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseIf only they could have stayed there. |
| Rachel Indeed 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was lyrical and gorgeous, evoking an almost magical sense of innocence and possibility. I loved it! The second-person passages work very well to create a near-fairy-tale voice of narration. It feels like the last children's story Severus and Lily ever got to share, and I am glad that it went beautifully, unpredictably well for them. Thanks so much for sharing this! |