I'm really liking this so far! I can't wait for another chaptor,your writing is really fun to read and has a...I can't really think of a good word for it...maybe comftorable? *laughs* It's kinda hard to describe.Still,it's lovely!

Continue please!

I can't wait for an update! I'm so curious about little Jane!! ^_^

Woot! She made it back. pretty uneventful trip but we got some good insight on her past. This chapter was a much better length than the rest. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. I hope to see an update soon. Keep writing! ^.^

Uh-oh... i smell trouble. Hopefully nothing happens that keeps her longer than needs be. Otherwise Edward's gonna freak.

woot. now they have something more in common other than their scars. They can't die. So I'm wondering, if it's been that long, why is Jane still afraid?

*cue dramatic music*
Ha! So she was human but isn't any longer. Well she still is but she can't die. Perfect. *runs to the next chapter*

*gasp* I remember the BFG! They made a movie out of that book too. eck, I remember it was creepy; but I was pretty young when I saw it. Great chapter.

Classic irony here with them both at the door. I love it. *darts for the next chapter*

Creepy dream. Now I wonder if Jane is even human herself. Short chapter, but made up for it again with the great details.

o the truth is comming out. I'm glad jane got to see Edward in action.

Woot! Edward's gonna show her some skillz!! Edward is right though, he needs to not trust Jane. Who knows who she is. and she's obviously in some sort of trouble.

more of a mystery with Jane eh?
I'm sure the two of them can feel a bit more comfortable with the fact that they share scars. both in body and in mind.

wah! short chapter. Good thing their's more chapters to come Mwhahah!
funny how everyone in fanficdom seems to forget everything when they wake up the next morning.
Is something wrong with Jane? she seems like a pretty frail kid. Is she just starving or is she sick? hmm guess I should read more.

Poor Jane. Been there. I nearly feel asleep in a tub of hot water and boy did it suck the strength out of me. I hardly had the strength to dry off, get dress and drag my sorry self into bed. (I had the flu at the time, but still hehe)
I hope Edward won't pull away from Jane because I'm sure there will be more flashes of memory of Kim.