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| Silbr Angekl 2008-10-08 ch 22,  | abuseI loved the story. interesting writing style and extremely well written. but such a sad ending. it seems befitting though. at any rate loved the story keep it up ~Silbr |
| Necromancer Staff 2008-09-25 ch 22, | abuseGreat story, I loves it! I really love it! I am favoriting this because of its utter AWESOMENESS! -claps hands and jumps around excitedly- You're an amazing author with a lot of prospect and talent. No...wait! -breaks down crying- IT CAN'T BE OVER! I wanna know what happens next! No! -Necromancer Staff |
| me 2008-09-03 ch 22, anon. | abusedude. ah man. well, at least he has some good experence with fighting. that seems to be the only department he hasn't lost in yet (considering the fact that the arrow won it's fight with his best friends head) |
| Mandalore18 2008-08-03 ch 22, | abuseThis guy can never catch a break can he good job. |
| The Revoker 2008-08-01 ch 22, | abuseWell... I wanna say I told ya so, but at the same time I really don't feel like it... Well, now we have to see how this turns out. It can't end here... right? He has to go on another 'broken crusade', right? Please don't leave us hanging, Obsidian! |
| Jessica Malatori 2008-07-31 ch 22, | abuseWhat? No! No! Why? I was so happy that ... he was finally at peace... and then this happens! *sigh* Oh well. Excellent story. I enjoyed it thoroughly and look forward to more from you in the Oblivion Section :). |
| The Revoker 2008-07-31 ch 21, | abuseAnd this is were things go wrong. Eh... things never stay bright for very long in your stories... But, keep going, please. I'm interested to see how things are going to get screwed up in this one. Whatver happens, I'm sure it will be heart wrenching. Never let it be said your not good at what you do. |
| Mandalore18 2008-07-30 ch 21, | abuseIt seems odd for them to have sex when she is pregent hopefully nothing is going to be wrong with the baby. Well good chapter all in all keep it up. |
| The Revoker 2008-07-29 ch 19, | abuseAlrighty, just wanted to say these last few chapters have been awesome. I am looking forward to the contiuation of this sotry now that things arn't repeating like they were before. I know the repetition was nessessary to show how horribly entrenched he was. But, its all good. Please update soon! |
| Jessica Malatori 2008-07-27 ch 16, | abuseNice Chapter. I enjoyed how Ungolim was included, even if it was only a brief cameo. |
| just a guy 2008-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was great dude. best first chapter i've seen in a long time. didn't like the fact that it was told in the present, but it was still great. |
| Jessica Malatori 2008-07-24 ch 14, | abuseI like where this is going... the arc of falling... and falling more... and then finally trying to make things right... I love it. |
| Jessica Malatori 2008-07-23 ch 13, | abuseOh no! That's not good... :( Good Chapter. |
| LordEdd 2008-07-23 ch 13, | abusejesus, i hate you doin? |
| Mandalore18 2008-07-23 ch 13, | abuseThe ending was just great I loved it probably no one seen in coming and it was the greatest every and can't wait to read ch 14 update soon. |