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siarafaerie-101-miss 8/4/08 . chapter 8
finally got some time to read it, the whole things great. got some pretty crackup parts teo. Tehe.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Koneko Hoshi 7/21/08 . chapter 8
This is interesting so far. I like how Sora tried to bribe Axel.
MinxBubbleOo 7/21/08 . chapter 8
XD that turned out better than when i said it! great work you is pro awesome! tehe i changed it and RAW SECRET STOLE MY QUOTE! now is fuming! (steam out of ears!) updateth sooneth!
xXHiddenSecretXx 7/21/08 . chapter 8
AH HOW COULD YOU PUT ROXAS IN THIS! then again that lime scene with Axel was quite funny. with the thrasing and the grinding. If it were Minx it would b a lemon by now...and riku would b watching. I'm contemplating writing a KH vamp story so yous can put it in that C2. not sure yet. But props i wuv it. UPDATE SOON! Wow this is a long review. um i wonder wat would happen if i put vampires in a sweep story. OR STRANGE TRIO! AND SORA AND RIKU COULD B THAT VAMPIRES! ah thats the best idea ive had in ages. well i have lots of art 2 do. Wuv u you and c ya at school 2moro. *hearts and kisses and lots of other yummy things* from Secret.

p.s. I wonder what people are going to think when they read you reviews!HEHE!
MinxBubbleOo 7/15/08 . chapter 7
XD CLOUD AND LEON! I WIN AGAIN AGAIN! um great choice i think but brunette is a female with brown hair...just thought you'd might want to know...i found that out not to long ago actually...working on a CloudxLeon XD. great work and you'd better update soon. (squeals) see i read it all!
MinxBubbleOo 7/15/08 . chapter 6
Being a vampire is like being a doublesided axe, nothing but blood on all sides XD na just kidding very emotional chappy. tis Pro Execellent!
MinxBubbleOo 7/15/08 . chapter 5
“Right,” Sora said as he skipped over to the middle of the room.“Are you ready to begin?” he asked.“Begin what?” Riku answered.(grins) love it... nothing more needs saying...i'll leave you to ponder XD
MinxBubbleOo 7/15/08 . chapter 4
(giggles) oh so very kinky of you...(sniggers) he has a very manly name . awesome but some spelling errors like in the last line . meh onwards toward the last update!
MinxBubbleOo 7/15/08 . chapter 3
TADA! HER IS ME REVIEWING...see i told you i would and i even added you to alerts . i is sorry...anyway um great chappy and here goes me to read more!(Pictures Riku asleep drooling) Aw so KAWAII!
xXHiddenSecretXx 7/15/08 . chapter 7
I GET IT! I finally get whats going on! so u made Cloud and Leon the Bad guys and there vampires trying to find Sora. Did they just kill Yuffie? NO Shes one of my fav characters! Update soon!

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xXHiddenSecretXx 7/15/08 . chapter 6
YAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER! i have this one on alert to so u don't have to send me emails. Im just going along with the whole reveiw to each chapter thing so im going to read the next chapter. BYE!

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AnsemMesna 7/15/08 . chapter 7
Cloud and Leon, right?
xXHiddenSecretXx 7/6/08 . chapter 5
Hello my pretty...again. Cool chapter. U just had to put in that axel was really cool didnt you? Anyway update soon and I WUV U!

FROM YOUR BESTEST FRIEND IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD (along with Minx) Secret!
xXHiddenSecretXx 7/6/08 . chapter 4
Ok that was a kol chapter. But again u spelt fourth wrong and the start.
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xXHiddenSecretXx 7/6/08 . chapter 3
Kol chapter. Heheh. it's funny about axel and roxas. Oh and ill just be miss punctuation 4 one second and say that in your authors note at the bottom you spelt third wrong. I mean thried? Anyway ON TO NEXT CHAPTER!

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