Beautifuly done and o introspective.

I really like this story! I especially love those last two lines of the story. You have a true talent with writing.

The last sentence is very good. There's some phrases in here I don't like because of their casual tone ("the fine Echani specimen.", "pompous ass-itude"), you've got a pretty good command of prose and some nicely simple lines that really express Revan's dilemma ("She was a good guy.")