Good story
Just a few things that I would suggest you do to make this story flow smoothly;

There are a few grammar errors- hanged (hung), were (where)
And 1 sentence where Mrs Bakshi says "You and Lalita sleep well", you forgt to add some puctuation marks

I presume you were anxious to get the story done? I usually am and have to redo some chaps of mine.

Anyway, GREAT story and I can't wait to see how it goes.

The words of Tigger
TTFN (Ta ta for now)

Yes! Some physical contact. That was probably the only thing I think was lacking in the movie although I know it was out of respect for the leading lady. Aw Darcy's inlove. I hope he tells Lalita soon. I'm sure see feels the same about him. Goa should be fun.

This is most definitely how the orginal story should've gone. I like the fact that the boy were able to stay with the girls. They can really get to know each other. I'm glad darcy was up front and honest about johnny and his mother earlier on in their relationship. It's gonna make their relationship alot stronger. I wonder when and where Johnny's gonna show himself.

I have to say I like that they seem to click better in your story then in the movie. I like that they had some alone time at the beggining and darcy didn't seem so closed of to liking an indian girl like he did at the beginning of the movie. I can't wait to see their story grow and develope. Keep it coming chica!

This movie is one of my favorites. It's gonna be much more interesting to reading this coming from the main characters point of view. I can't wait to see the changes you make. I'm off to read the next chapter. I did see that it has been a long time since you updated though. I hope you haven't given up on this story. I promise if you add I will comment. I hate writting and not recieving good feedback.

I like your fic. Bride and Prejudice is my favorite movie. I wish Lalita and Will had more interactions like in your fic but I think the movie is still great.You wrote things that could not happen in India like the boys sleeping in the girls' room but it's a fic and it's the way you would like the story to happen.It's also true that nowadays some Bollywood movies include things that can happen in western movies. Carry on, I can't wait to read more.